Hi Helm :)
Well they both look great.
Viking:
I don't think he looks deformed. Do you mean his right shoulder? If so, he looks as though he is inspecting his sword and his right elbow would move slightly back and shoulder might seem to move closer to his body. I think thats OK really. Maye fluff out his coat a bit on that side a bit..Also, just a suggestion: the background a little darker and a those strategically placed highlights a little bit brighter..
Viking Boat:
Maybe some sea spray and a bit more choppiness to the sea in general as it looks a bit that way to me..Oh and the boat seems just a bit too grey maybe..
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Originally Posted by Helm
Hi Inkgal, I really love where the water meets the edge, it has nice depth.
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Yes, you hit the nail on the head I thought that also especially to the right and front..